my first original track, let me know what you think.

Hello Paul

I had a listen to your track and its a little repetitive with the pad sound, you need a bit more variation and a melody over the top.
Just needs a little bit more structure here and there to make it shine.I see you are from the uk, me too my friend. If you have any questions then feel free to ask mate. But keep up the good work Paul :)

Have a listen to my track on this forum, here is the link and leave a few comments if you wish :)

New future bass track F4F
 
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Nice work! I thought it was cool, but I agree with Fulloctave in the sense that there needs to be a little more going on in the track. You could try adding counter melodies, or more fx. Just a thought :D this is definitely better than my first original track though!
 
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