MY First "original" Song! ( I NEED SOME FEEDBACK THX)

Ok writing as i listen.
Like the melody. Intro is too long, one snap with the reverb is to loud in the beginning, song needs more low end and a deeper bass, like the part that starts at 1.00, really nice, except for the snare which is not good. Overall it's a good start but personally I like when songs are finished to the best of each persons ability.
 
Needs work ...it sounds a bit midi and it needs to sound fuller. I Agree with MrsWester for the low end. Keep it up.
 
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