Melodramatic Synth-pop track

[Happy_jay_123]

Hello. This is my first post asking for feedback. I just want to know you're feedback to this track. Thanks in advance!

 

[Myren Music]

good track!
I think the high end is harsh at certain points of the track especially with that bell

 

[Happy_jay_123]

Thank you for the advice @Myren Music..

 

[audiotechnica25]

I like the chords you used here man. I think though that the sustained synth is taking up a lot of space in the mix so maybe eq it a bit more. You could also use a more clicky kick, either with a different kick or with a transient shaper. Love the little fills and cinematic things you do here as well. The tambourine your using is a little loud but I like the groove it gives the track. To make it more impactful maybe have some points in times when it's not being used. Keep up the work man.

 

[Happy_jay_123]

@audiotechnica25 Thank you! I'll be working on it!