Made a new chillout track. (F4F)

[Jef Ferson]

Hi guys,

After reading some tips online on how i could improve my workflow, i decided to try and make a track as fast as possible, And this is the result ! (took me about a day)

It's kind of a chillout track. Hope you like it ! And don't forget to post your own songs

https://soundcloud.com/rowbance/floating-nights

 

[Emedee]

Your link doesn't w3rk.

 

[Jef Ferson]

Huh that's strange. I just posted the SC link. Doesn't work for me either...

 

[Jef Ferson]

I kinda fixed it

 

[Emedee]

Hi! the song is too repetitive it's got too loud pads, the pluck is too low, the kick has too little punch. Now it's your turn to comment my song.

Delta by Emedee - Listen to music

 

[BVRN]

Hi, Jef. Your song is really chill and I like where it is going. I would add some more lead sounds to keep it interesting and maybe vary the drums as well. All in all, good job.

 

[Jef Ferson]

Hi! the song is too repetitive it's got too loud pads, the pluck is too low, the kick has too little punch. Now it's your turn to comment my song.

Delta by Emedee - Listen to music

Hi thanks for the tips. Don't really agree with the pads being to loud. But the piano is indeed a bit low now that you say it... I left a comment on your soundcloud.

 

[Jef Ferson]

Thanks for the feedback BVNR ! Yeah there's def some space for an extra lead. I might rework the song in the future. I'll keep it in mind

 

[un_official]

hi jef. really nice drums and atmosphere! the drums could be a bit more stereo and upfront for our taste.

really smooth track!

please also leave a feedback on our newest track!
thanks
-un