Listen to my new song PLS

[Deefex]

Hey guys, check out my recent rework of another track I had up. It's called 'Divine Life'
Thanks for listening.
Divine Life by Deefex | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[DJMSherman]

Just listened......props on the arrangement, although the eq between all the parts is off......fix the bass and the melody eq and share again.........

Intro.....also is very stagnant.......

Listen to mine....
Listen to Western Impairments(Original)*Free DL* by ShErMaN #np on #SoundCloud
Western Impairments(Original)*Free DL* by ShErMaN | Sh Er Ma N | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[Heiko Fischer]

Sounds great!

 

[Deefex]

Thank you very much. Someone else said the bass was also a bit off. I'm mixing using headphones. So it's tough.
But thanks for the honest feedback. honesty makes me know how to work better the next time