Look, I'm 15 years old and this is my first track, so I don't expect to top the charts or anything. But if you could just tell what it's missing or some errors, I'll be more than thankful to you. Just to add: This tune isn't anywhere close to being finished, so I'd love if you could also suggest what I should add after what has been made so far.
That said, here's the track.
That said, here's the track.