Just lookin for some feedback on a track (approx. 10% complete)

ImSae

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Look, I'm 15 years old and this is my first track, so I don't expect to top the charts or anything. But if you could just tell what it's missing or some errors, I'll be more than thankful to you. Just to add: This tune isn't anywhere close to being finished, so I'd love if you could also suggest what I should add after what has been made so far.
That said, here's the track.
 
The lead up to the drop is about twice as long as it needs to be since it's repeating most elements for a second time, I would try to transition everything into just 1 run up to the drop and maybe make a short intro with the songs main melody so people will be ready for it when the drop hits. The bass kick at 1:05 also sounds like its notching the volume too much. Good start though man keep it up!
 
Personally I think that the outro is longer than it needs to be, if you shorten it a bit the outro sounds less boring in the end. But man you did a great job, I think!
 
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