I'm experimenting with new techniques

I think my structure is weak and i should focus more on composition...
 
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that opening synth garte me a bit however it souded better when the drums came in
sounds a bit muddy and yeah the composition is a bit boring and repetitive - dont worry im no better
when it goes into the next section its cool
i see alot of potential and the song isnt bad
return the feed when u get a chance
sounds look a cool score for a video game
the melody is nice and progresses naturally
mix isnt bad just maybe some earlier percussion to grab and hold the listeners attention
overall its cool spacey tune with alot of potential
retrurn the feed when u get a chance
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-new-electric-guitar-will-return-feed-533482/
 
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add some bassline to blanket the high frequencies. It doesn't have to be too crazy, but can definitely even out with the higher sounds (in the first part of the song). The bassline you have coming in is kinda random but makes sense later. The bells with the bassline are really cool! that's the most profound part of the song and most captivating. Cool tune.
 
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