I made a Dance Track, Need feedback :)

[Magical_]

Work in progress, (I made in an hour) I just wanted to share it before I get emotionally attached which would make it harder to share right away. the mix is very rough and I barely EQ'D anything, just leveled. how is the melody, drum pattern, etc? is the idea worth


Test Dance Track (Rough Mix) by Magical Music | Free Listening on SoundCloud