Nice vocals u got there the chords sound really cool aswell.
I might would turn down the closed hats a little bit, and maybe EQ the highest parts of it since its kinda harsh to my ears.
The vocal gets drowned really hard in the build up, thats not really something u want.
I would use a bit heavier sidechaining aswell (maybe even on the rides), the kick doesnt come out clear enough.
Overall great concept and melodies, I like it
Could u give me some feedback on this thread?
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