+ nice pluck playing the melody
+ nice "bell" sounds in the background during the intro - the intro is my favorite part btw. !
- the part between 1:30 and 2:00 feels a little "empty" - I guess you are using it as a transition/break but it feels like there is something missing. Maybe some sort of buildup could do the job or just continue with the strings.
- I feel there is a lot of room in this song for a final mastering - I know you might find this akward (I do) but you can check fiverr.com and have your song mastered by people with some experience and equipment for 5$. Ofc you can try and do it yourself but for me it is usally the hardest part in the production process