Hey Erik,
Thanks for sharing, really cool track! I agree that the vocals aren't perfect, but I can't even begin to guess what could be done better as I haven't done any recording/editing of vocals since the last time I was studying at my conservatory, which was over 5 years ago lol I would definitely compress them more and EQ the life out of them, but I'd make sure the vocals are as steady volume-wise as possible, and then boost that as much as possible in the mix stages to really have that vocal shine through. Speaking of shining through, maybe freeing up some space frequency-wise from other instruments could create an opening for the vocals to get through a little better. Otherwise, and I say this again, really cool track!
Here's my latest upload, and I'd appreciate any feedback on it:
Camila Cabello - Havana ft. Young Thug (AVGHOST remix)
Best!