FEEDBACK PLZ - My Second Track, Main Melody Only

LBLOW

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Hi everybody, I'm starting a new track and i listened all the feedback from the first and trying to put on this one. And to not commit mistakes again i would appreciate some feedback on this main melody, to fix it, every is welcome! Its an Electro-House track i will call Roller Coaster.

https://soundcloud.com/lipstick-blow-230725391/roller-coaster


Thaaaaaaaaanks!!!!!!!!!! \ :D\:D/:D\:D/:D|:D|:D \:D\:D/:D/:D |:D:D| |:D\:D/ \:D/:D/:D/:D \:D\:D/
 
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