"Very Bad" is certainly in the ear of the beholder. I disagree with the poster above. The melody is a little repetitive; bridge, build-up/drop/breakdown would be nice, and yes you definitely need better drum samples. But you did some creative things with effects and the basic idea is as clever as most EDM. It's about sound selection and mixing, I think, and people can only improve when they get honest feedback, on what they did well as well as what needs improvement.
Good job, keep working at it and listen to other EDM DJ's and producers and try to incorporate more of the stylistic hallmarks.