Feedback Appreciated Please!

Frustrated

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Any feedback on this would be really appreciated.


Too muddy? Too much percussion? Strings too quiet? Piano too loud?


Too boring/repetitive overall?


Also, I've played this back on my phone and it sounds OK, but on my tablet it sounds awful! Other people's Soundcloud stuff sounds fine on my tablet, so I don't know what's going on there. (I uploaded a 16bit dithered 41k WAV.)


Hope my Soundcloud link works, it's set to private so I hope you can access it via this link...


Blackford by Subotsky | Free Listening on SoundCloud



Thanks.


PS: I am now going to have one long agonising cringe until someone replies. I gave up making music 15 years ago when someone said it was shit. (It WAS shit, but that still put me off trying again for so long!)
 
Fun vocals! I wish they arrived earlier in the song tho.

It feels like it is lacking some bass frequencies, and it gets a bit long with the same "riff" for my taste.
 
Fun vocals! I wish they arrived earlier in the song tho.

It feels like it is lacking some bass frequencies, and it gets a bit long with the same "riff" for my taste.

Thanks for the feedback, I'll take it on board and look again at the bass. Didn't want to overdo it, always seems too much when I listen in the car, maybe I cut too much.

I'll have to rethink the arrangement and see if I can change it up a bit.

Thanks for listening. :)
 
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