Cool track. But I can't get a grip of what kind of beat you are aiming for, sometimes it sounds like it's a 4/4 beat then suddenly 3/4. Correct me if I am wrong...
0:00 I really like the soothing style of this, clear and to the point!
0:30 Here the synth sounds a little weak(?) sorry if that sounds harsh, trust me I know it can be superhard to find a fitting synth that suits ones own style/needs and at the same time is filling and punchy. mmm, keep that main synth but add some layering would be a start.
1:25 When the music builds up here it feels great but still some slight thickening to the sounds should boost this further.