F4F! I Trusted U (Future Garage-ish song with Linkin Park sample)

[JaftheGiraffe]

Hey FP!

I'm looking for some feedback on this song I just put out. This is actually one of the first projects I ever did, but since I couldn't mix for my life back then it sounded pretty bad. I spent some time yesterday remastering it and going over my instrumentation, but I've exhausted my ideas for it. Take a listen and let me know what you think! Of course all feedback will be returned if you leave me a link!

https://soundcloud.com/jafariroberts/i-trusted-u

 

[namesi]

Dude, this is really cool. I would take out the vocal parts though ("I put my trust in you"). The beat though is dark and heavy. I love that sound. The change up at around 2:10 is cool. Keep it up!

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[JaftheGiraffe]

Thanks man, I left some feed on your thread

 

[optimist_music]

A very gloomy track, love the piano. I just don't think the vocals suit it right. Think the mix needs working on more, the sounds don't really stand out. I can't think of any technical words so ill leave it there haha!!