Just give me some feedback on my song and a link to your song and I will provide some honest feedback as soon as I can.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-need-some-feedback-my-song-structure-533471/
Hey guys. Above will take you to the original feedback page. If you dont wanna click that link, I provided the same info down below.
https://soundcloud.com/circuit-bored/real-honest-feedback-needed/s-Yveoj
Ok so this song is far from done. I would really like some help though. Now is the stage of the song where I start to iron out the audible wrinkles and rearrange the space of the song so to speak. Let me just address some problems I have seen with this song.First off the mix sucks. I don't know what approach to start with it though. What element should be more focused on than others? Here is my main major issue I have. The songs first 2 main parts from 0:00-0:51 and 1:27-2:29 flow into each other with some decent transitions and build on each other with similar music motifs as some fancy people would say. The 3rd act (2:37+) doesnt feel like part of the song though. I would usually just axe it and make the song short, but I have really grown to like this part of the song. Like a lot, and I usually dislike most of my stuff. I think I can fix the issue with some rearranging of the song, but I'm stuck. I could maybe tie the song together by having it transition to a retelling of the first 2 parts agin, but blending it has shown to be really difficult. Any ideas of how I should approach the structure of the song would be much-loved.
As for the song itself, all of it is guitar with the exception of the Sound FX played at some points and some synths I used for a pad in a few spots of the song. Also the drums. The bass is guitar, and the groove is guitar along with some sound effects created by using a wah wah pedal and reversals.
Any feedback will be appreciated.
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-need-some-feedback-my-song-structure-533471/
Hey guys. Above will take you to the original feedback page. If you dont wanna click that link, I provided the same info down below.
https://soundcloud.com/circuit-bored/real-honest-feedback-needed/s-Yveoj
Ok so this song is far from done. I would really like some help though. Now is the stage of the song where I start to iron out the audible wrinkles and rearrange the space of the song so to speak. Let me just address some problems I have seen with this song.First off the mix sucks. I don't know what approach to start with it though. What element should be more focused on than others? Here is my main major issue I have. The songs first 2 main parts from 0:00-0:51 and 1:27-2:29 flow into each other with some decent transitions and build on each other with similar music motifs as some fancy people would say. The 3rd act (2:37+) doesnt feel like part of the song though. I would usually just axe it and make the song short, but I have really grown to like this part of the song. Like a lot, and I usually dislike most of my stuff. I think I can fix the issue with some rearranging of the song, but I'm stuck. I could maybe tie the song together by having it transition to a retelling of the first 2 parts agin, but blending it has shown to be really difficult. Any ideas of how I should approach the structure of the song would be much-loved.
As for the song itself, all of it is guitar with the exception of the Sound FX played at some points and some synths I used for a pad in a few spots of the song. Also the drums. The bass is guitar, and the groove is guitar along with some sound effects created by using a wah wah pedal and reversals.
Any feedback will be appreciated.
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