f4f general electronic
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Bonsewswesa
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I see through your signature link that you're still learning stuff about music making technique so I'll try to share what I know where possible in my feedback.
The quiet section during the first minute gets almost inaudible, (having a sound that quiet can actually be just as distracting as having a sound that's too loud) also the fading of instruments after that is also a bit too much and the mixing feels like it's all over the place. The drums seem off-time with everything else and overall a lot of the song is too quiet. I do like your choices of instruments though and most of the melodies you've created sound interesting. Keep at it, you seem really talented and I hope to hear more of your progress in the future.
Finale v2 {Chiptune/Lo-Fi}
The quiet section during the first minute gets almost inaudible, (having a sound that quiet can actually be just as distracting as having a sound that's too loud) also the fading of instruments after that is also a bit too much and the mixing feels like it's all over the place. The drums seem off-time with everything else and overall a lot of the song is too quiet. I do like your choices of instruments though and most of the melodies you've created sound interesting. Keep at it, you seem really talented and I hope to hear more of your progress in the future.
Finale v2 {Chiptune/Lo-Fi}
some really cool elements. Just work on composition and getting a dance track together. (Rises, falls). Something that pushes the track to make people dance.
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https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-colors-f4f-anything-you-would-change-469564/
return the feed if you got time
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-colors-f4f-anything-you-would-change-469564/