There is some very good definition in the kick and bass imo, I don't think the vocal is necessarily too loud, actually it fits the track the way it is. I also like those little extra water samples you added in. I'm sorry I don't really have any critiques, it honestly feels like a solid track to me personally. Would love to receive some feedback on this: Harold Faltermeyer - Axel F (Charlie Raxx Remix) [F4F]
The main problem for me is the bass. Or at least it lacks some textures in the low end. Try to boost the sub or to layer something to your lead in that area. I think you should make the kick louder too. The structure of the song works for me.