Experimental electronic

Benneuh said:
Hey man,

Your melodies are nice. Try to make more layers like a bass underneath it, and something in the high frequencies as well. Right now the synths have kind of the same distorted sound wich interfere and that's not very pleasant for the ear. I think you should have more EQ'ing on the synhts.

cheers

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ful-trap-electronic-song-527740/#post50016341
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Thanks. Yeah I agree with you there I need to layer more in general. I think a synth was clipping slightly and the stereo spread on the backing synth created some weird effect too haha. I EQ'd them a lot but yeah needs more listening again now.

Ghost.Tapes said:
Very interesting, do you have more on this style? :)
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Thanks :), this one follows the same melodic style but it's different sound design wise:
https://soundcloud.com/theloopy/the-loopy-cool
 
Hey dxbrah! That is a pretty cool track. I like the melody and the beat in combination with the brass synth. Maybe you need a different structure and what do you think about vocals?

Please give me feedback about my song in my signature or click on this link: https://soundcloud.com/ryamakesmusic/different-world

Cheers
RYA
 
RYA said:
Hey dxbrah! That is a pretty cool track. I like the melody and the beat in combination with the brass synth. Maybe you need a different structure and what do you think about vocals?

Please give me feedback about my song in my signature or click on this link: https://soundcloud.com/ryamakesmusic/different-world

Cheers
RYA
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Thanks RYA. Yeah I could refine it into a more traditional structure and make it more cohesive. I'm eventually going to use vocals instead of synths in all my tracks. Listened to your track, I really liked it. Very original. Got some slight Bowie vibes haha. I think the hook was catchy but towards the end the same phrases get repeated too much in my opinion. You could write some more lyrics to help it feel more fresh. Also for the ending maybe you could have the vocals hum along the bassline with some wide panning and layer multiple takes. Or just do the same thing with the hook. Nice work.
 
Its good I enjoyed it, nice catchy melody. Would be nice to have some more bass in the mix but it was still good. Would make good video game music I'd imagine, good at keeping you alert.
 
MattJones said:
Its good I enjoyed it, nice catchy melody. Would be nice to have some more bass in the mix but it was still good. Would make good video game music I'd imagine, good at keeping you alert.
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Thanks man. Yeah you're right about the bass haha.
 
You have some nice melodies in there. The sound design part could be better though. For how long are you producing music?
 
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