I agree with MuqaThe bass imo has no body, is like u cut all the low mid feqs and left only that faint growl, and its a little much contrast to the rough one u add later every 4th beat, if u wanted that deep mixing on the bass try raise it an octave and see if u can fix that way. Hats needs to be eq:ed but the pattern is nice.
Oh and 8UP, I have the volume all the way up and always produce with my Sennheiser headphones on.
I know that is not ideal, but financial reasons are still keeping me away from some good speakers. Have to say though that when I take my tracks to my car and listen in there (I love the dynamics inside a car) they almost always sound good, so I guess something is going right.