EDM style track want your opinion about my skill

[DavidJofficial]

Hi just want to share my edm track, and have your opinion about it.
Do i have some progress or its still total newbie song?

 

[Cazaa]

Hey,

the idea is good, but for me more variety could be there.

 

[DavidJofficial]

Hey,

the idea is good, but for me more variety could be there.

but what u can comment about my skill this song is best of my creations ;D

 

[Cazaa]

but what u can comment about my skill this song is best of my creations ;D

Your Skill? It's not bad, the melody is nice. But there are some things you can make better.

For example:

- Layer your synth-lead to make the sound bigger and powerfull,
- More sidechain
- Use hats
- edit the bassline, i can't hear it
- use a reverb-effekt on the masterchannel for the buildup at 1:15min and try a highpass-filter which opens a little bit before the drop comes

excuse me, my english is not perfect. I hope you understand me...

 

[DavidJofficial]

i do understand you but what layer your synth lead mean

 

[Cazaa]

You don't know what layering is? Sound-layering?
use more than ohne Synth-Sound for example

 

[DavidJofficial]

AH YOU MEAN put like 2 lead with same melody? my english isnt good and i dont know that names of all this stuff

 

[Cazaa]

yes, exactly!

 

[DavidJofficial]

ok then i know it ;D

 

[Alexey Lavrov]

I would make the intro more busy. More bass in the drop. Nice melody. Needs better kick. Make sure when you mix you always have a professional track in the similar style to listen to.