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really nice idea! some chords could be somewhat different i think at least you need to mix out some disturbing frequences in the piano, maybe a few high mids in the "hornlike sound"aswell, at the intro. drums and bass are really good tho, sweet percussions! keep it up!

 
officialdysfunction said:
Hey guys,

check this out and tell me what you think!

https://soundcloud.com/official-dysfunction/dysfunction-bright-lights-original-mix-1

Thanks :)
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Ooh, love the drop w/ the deep funky bass! For my tastes, I'd add a bit more excitement for the build up. Maybe adding a white noise that's filtered out and some synth that's going up an octave, or simply making a FULL stop a whole bar before the Drop/Chorus section. I actually don't produce EDM anymore, but I still enjoy it alot. I do hip hop w/ some EDM influences. Check it!

**YOUR Opinion is VALUABLE. Return the favor, yeah?**
https://soundcloud.com/michaeljoelmusic/from-dreams-awoken-demo
 
blackroyalty said:
Ooh, love the drop w/ the deep funky bass! For my tastes, I'd add a bit more excitement for the build up. Maybe adding a white noise that's filtered out and some synth that's going up an octave, or simply making a FULL stop a whole bar before the Drop/Chorus section. I actually don't produce EDM anymore, but I still enjoy it alot. I do hip hop w/ some EDM influences. Check it!

**YOUR Opinion is VALUABLE. Return the favor, yeah?**
https://soundcloud.com/michaeljoelmusic/from-dreams-awoken-demo
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Thanks for the good words :)
 
Not to much my style of music but i love the buildup starting at :32 that shit is so ambient and sounds nice, but you shoulda tweaked the eq and compression of the piano a little more in my opinion or tried to find a nicer VST if it isn't sampled. Your release wasn't strong enough in my opinion. You should change the bass up a little throughout the different releases, When that beat dropped it shoulda just went berserk, but it's gotta a really chill atmosphere to the whole beat. You really shoulda threw in some highquality synths when the beat breaks down and builds up again with just the piano and strings but that's just my opinion, Good work though man keep grinding!!

please return the favor @
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...riginal-hiphop-tranceish-instrumental-475318/
and
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...day-who-grindin-like-me-f4f-good-life-475339/
 
I love the percussions and like the first part of the track very much.

What I would change is the instrument for the lead and remove the drum roll before the drop. Just to keep track nice and deep.
 
nice track, definitly could zone out to this on the dance floor, that off beat clap near the beginning throws off the groove a little, that melody in the second part of the track is dope though
 
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