Debut track. (It's a 104BPM instrumental)

[Resonica]

I'm not sure where to take it at this point. I'm looking to record some bass guitar, and then it'll probably be male vocals (rap).

Anyway, here is the link: https://soundcloud.com/dnbmotion/carousel-demo/s-hjt9o

Once I've received feedback, I'll look into giving feedback on other stuff.

Thank you.

 

[Resonica]

I added some bass guitar: https://soundcloud.com/dnbmotion/carousel-demo-1/s-XlkPb

 

[tomaszp]

Well, that's completely not my style, but sounds good - oldschool. Get it louder, add some vocals and some movement in drums and instruments and it should sound more deep.

Good luck !

 

[Resonica]

Cheers man, I have to admit it's not my style either, but what evolved from my first attempt using a reference track. I'll consider your advice and post the end game once it's finished Thanks.

 

[Resonica]

It's up to the point where I'm happy to start the vocal process. (Either find a vocalist or attempt something myself) It's available to hear here: https://soundcloud.com/manlikemotion/cardinal

It's 114bpm, not 104 like I originally posted.