Dance track - F4F

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davidgericke

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Hi. Just finished a new track, I've been messing around with different genres. Let me know if its interesting, average or shit. Thanks
 
Hi!

I like the dark rave-like synth in the drop, your melody compliments the bass pretty well. I would shy away personally from using those "talking" samples as they sort of reduce the quality of any song. Maybe try to find a femal acapella to sample, chop up, and use instead if possible. I know that might be a challege because there is need to match the keys of your song and the vocals, perhaps another member can help with that I am still quite new.

Edit: I followed you

If you have time:
Soundcloud.com/rhorains/believe

Thanks :-)
RR
 
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I like the intro I think you should work on the mixing a little bit more,
The kick and clap are way to loud for the rest of the track.
I like the lead too and like a previous user said I would stay far away from vocal samples that is just talking.
Other then that keep up the good work bro! and keep practicing :-)
If you could check out my latest track and leave a little feedback and maybe even get your vote that sure would be appreciated! :-)
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-electro-house-feedback-will-returned-512772/
 
I enjoyed it. It did get a little bit repetitive in the middle but you cleaned it up by the end. The only thing I'd really change is to add in some more low frequencies. It all kind of sits pretty high, especially that rising synth before the drops. Other than that, nice track

Check out mine:
https://soundcloud.com/jaztecprods/nature
 
I don't know what TrapTommy is listening to your song on but your kick and clap are NOT too loud. It sounds like your synths could use some EQing, maybe some autopanning. But good job man.

This is my track, feel free to listen and tell me what you think
 
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I like these ideas, especially the melodies and use of voice sampling. definitely interesting and above "average" I would say. at 1:50 I like this part, I really like breaks like this in edm songs :) the bass thing at 2:25 is in just the right spot, good attention to detail with the small things. Maybe the drops could be a little more interesting with some more stuff going on, you got the right ideas though.

check out mine?

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...rance-house-dance/chillstep-remix-f4f-513612/
 
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