Sounds epic! I don't really have a lot of experience about cinematic music, so its hard to comment on certain elements, so take my comments with a grain of salt. To my ears, I couldn't really hear a clear structure, each section just kind of bled into the next, which maybe is fine or I just don't know how cinematic is structured, but it sounded like it jumped around in the structure. The sounds themselves were really cool, so great work on the sound design/choices. There were some very epic melodic moments in there, very enjoyable to listen to. I think if you're going to aim for marketing to people who listen to EDM, you should consider structuring it more like an EDM track while keeping a lot of these cinematic elements. Would be super epic and perhaps easier for a typical EDM consumer to listen to. I listen to classical or romantic music and the structuring there is sometimes hard for modern pop or EDM listeners to follow, even if I think its rad. Just something to consider maybe. Overall super awesome track, thanks for posting and welcome to the forums.