Hey man, I'm just going to break this down into your categories:
Sound Choice: I liked the synth and bass combination, it seemed to throw me back into the 90s for some reason, but with a modern edge in some ways. Difficult to describe but I was definitely experiencing the track rather than listening, always a good sign!
Transition: 0:24 was fine, obviously no lead in was needed for this kind of vibe. 2:49 where the lead dropped off, i feel like the right side is dampened slightly? its extremely minor and it might just be me and my poor headphones and it being very late. That said, i love how the lead at this bit seems to sway from side to side and it does it so elegantly you almost find your head following it, fab job on that bit.
Interest factor: this is a tough one because this is different to what I'm used to listening to, but it did keep me listening, and id didnt really find myself skipping sections, although maybe it could benefit from something more unexpected? but thats more of a personal taste and I understand it's probably now what youre going for with a chill track
Mix: I feel as though the kick could do with being more prominent, whether that be a more aggressive sample or cranking it up slightly, i think that would deliver so much to the track, because with chill music i tend to focus on the beat, so again thats just another personal one
Overall: great track, again it was an experience to listen to, the suggestions here are mainly me just looking for things to be helpful with, and overall i enjoyed the track so I'll throw it a like shortly!
If youd be able to provide me any feedback I'd appreciate it man:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ny-darko-hurricane-remix-505893/#post49924279
All the best
Edit: no like option on a private track (duh) sorry for being a plonker
