Okay so I'm going to be honest I don't really know what feedback to give you to improve but I'll do my best. My first impression was good. I watched the whole thing and was tripped out by the experience. The music and video fit together strangely well. It reminds me of those surreal memes people make on youtube. I think the style and direction you're taking this is in a good direction, but the production quality of both the video and music can be improved. But unfortunately I don't really know anything specifically helpful to say other than keep practicing since I don't make videos like this or music like this. It reminded me a lot of like Adult Swims "Off the Air" videos so it might be worth looking those up as a reference. Maybe it'll give you some ideas on how to improve? The music and video combined was definitely what made the experience.