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hey Bhatman,

nice chilled track you got going on here ,

in my opinion just thought your snare sound was a bit to prominent

had me thinking of being on a beach and very relaxing track which i enjoyed
 
Glasman said:
hey Bhatman,

nice chilled track you got going on here ,

in my opinion just thought your snare sound was a bit to prominent

had me thinking of being on a beach and very relaxing track which i enjoyed
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Sub-conscious influence from the picture maybe?



OP:

The melodies go together.

However, in my opinion there needs to be more variation in all of the sounds.

Question, do you struggle with patience? I often wonder if many struggle finding the patience to spend a long time on a track to add lots of detail and variation, as I did, and still do occasionally. If you do, I urge you to push yourself, you'll be happy with the results.
 
Hey nice chill track....my style.....ive had a few beers so everything sounds good....but listening again, the snare needs some more groove to it, or less of if.........its a great mix...good job

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Really nice and chilled! I agree the snare is a little too loud. Perhaps try and blend it into the mix more and mess around with a compressor to add some more punch whilst not letting it get too loud. Also I think you can change the pace up at times - it doesn't really go anywhere. Still a very nice sound though.
 
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