Awesome Attempt At House Music, Feedback Please (F4F)

[nehemeizcool]

Hello, Everyone

So, I decided i was going to try to make some house type music

At least i hope it sounds like house music....

let me know what you guys think, if it sucks or not lol thanks

and ill return the feedback

heres the soundcloud:

 

[MrAugust]

Make sure your bass pumps. Try some side chain compression. Maybe give the melody a few changes and don't forget the drop. It sounds ...........Happy

 

[Leedeluxx]

I think MrAugust said it all really... Although I will say that the lead does get a little repetitive. Try holding back on it and introduce a cropped and looped section of it leading up to the main break, then alow it to develop over the length of the break.

 

[nehemeizcool]

Thanks for the feedback, i will definitely apply those aspects in my next house beat

 

[Tru_akil]

nice track sound like something i could take some shots to lol. I think you should make the kick louder, eq, and compress it for more punch other that i like

 

[vanholden]

the melody is quite good, but some energy in your track is missing ... try to enhance it with some sidechain effects and noise in the background etc. ! keep on !

have a look at my new production :
Olympia (Original Mix) released | Progressive House