I have kind of a mixed opinion about this one. While I really like the slow first - and middle parts (Sound Design, melody and athmosphere are on point), I am not a great fan of the faster parts in between, where the beat kicks in and everything blends together. I guess that's a matter of personal taste though.
In the future you could try to pursue ideas more consequently, even if that means drifting away from a usual song structure. (Does that make sense? I hope so...). Would have been nice to hear how that ambient intro turned out, if instead of a beat you'd just focused on constantly building the athmosphere around it.
But thats just my opinion...
Feel free to critizise my songs too! https://www.futureproducers.com/for...nce/ambient-deep-house-chill-whatever-530714/
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