Ain't no sunshine tropical house cover wip (F4F)

[Fulloctave]

Just finished an early mix of a cover version of Ain't no sunshine by bill withers.
its tropical house version with me on vocals and produced in Flstudio 12.
As its a early version any feedback would be great

Ain't No Sunshine (Work in Progress Tropical House Cover) by Fulloctave | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[Alex Gogu]

Great re-interpretation of ain't no sunshine , takes my mind to the Caribbean. really interesting piece but should've went for a different wind instrument in my opinion *
7/10 - innovative , percussion made the deal ! brave enough to play with vocals , I like that !

 

[Fulloctave]

Great re-interpretation of ain't no sunshine , takes my mind to the Caribbean. really interesting piece but should've went for a different wind instrument in my opinion *
7/10 - innovative , percussion made the deal ! brave enough to play with vocals , I like that !

Thanks for the feedback, always loved this track and wanted to put my spin on it

 

[johnroy]

...writing while typing:

I like the intro. The mix is already clean and you have a nice dynamic between the drums and the bouncy bass. The violins are also a nice element in your drums, pretty unexpected in EDM.

Well, I really enjoy it. It's simple and it works.

Thanks : Escape The World - Electro /F4F!/

 

[Glitch1044]

This makes me want to go to a beach! Too bad I live in freakin Canada.
Lol Good stuff man!

 

[Fulloctave]

...writing while typing:

I like the intro. The mix is already clean and you have a nice dynamic between the drums and the bouncy bass. The violins are also a nice element in your drums, pretty unexpected in EDM.

Well, I really enjoy it. It's simple and it works.

Thanks : Escape The World - Electro /F4F!/

Cheers I have left you some feedback

 

[Fulloctave]

This makes me want to go to a beach! Too bad I live in freakin Canada.
Lol Good stuff man!

Thanks mate its much appreciated

 

[MarkSmh]

That crash in the intro gave me an heart attack.

Nice bassline u got there!
I think the piano could be harder overall.

I would drop the kick in the verse (do it back later on).
Also I think this song could have been a bit longer with some breaks.

Would u mind checking out my track?
[Melodic house] Mark Smit - Delusions

 

[Fulloctave]

That crash in the intro gave me an heart attack.

Nice bassline u got there!
I think the piano could be harder overall.

I would drop the kick in the verse (do it back later on).
Also I think this song could have been a bit longer with some breaks.

Would u mind checking out my track?
[Melodic house] Mark Smit - Delusions

Cheers mate, I left you some feedback

 

[sstreiffert]

Very unusual sound, but I like it. I think it's pretty well-put-together. The one thing I miss is some type of breaks (that someone above mentioned too) to mix the energy up a bit, to help build it up a bit. Dropping the kick at the verse could be an option, but I'd rather go for filling the chorus and mixing the higher end percussions up a bit more.

 

[Fulloctave]

Very unusual sound, but I like it. I think it's pretty well-put-together. The one thing I miss is some type of breaks (that someone above mentioned too) to mix the energy up a bit, to help build it up a bit. Dropping the kick at the verse could be an option, but I'd rather go for filling the chorus and mixing the higher end percussions up a bit more.

Cheers, its only an early mix and just wanted feedback on the track as it is or take it in another direction