super super original here, i dig it a ton. the mixing feels unbalanced a bit, but from what i hear it sounds like thats mainly based on how you mastered the track to make it loud is clipping the track itself. the mixdown isnt dynamic enough and then it almost sound like a brickwalled master on top of that. the main place im hearing this problem is from :42 to 1:02, and because of that when the beat kicks afterwards, it loses power because the phrase in front of it is so loud. I really like how original the composition of this track is, and i can't wait to hear what it becomes as you practice overtime.