Dot's Review: MoBeatz: My Brother.

Dot_Robinson

Psalms 37:4
Hello FP'ers!

MoBeatz "Brother"

First, thank you to those who have submitted their music for review. I am honored to assist my piers in their creative trek to international stardom.

My first review is a creative one. Submitted by MoBeatz, I was shocked by how 'unfamiliar', in sound, this beat was. Initially, I could not connect the sound gushing from my speakers to that of something familiar. In my confusion, I was inspired to listen further.

After two clicks of the repeat icon, I stumbled upon a reference point. Something I could compare this beat to, sonically at least.

The awkward, almost incorrect timing of the sample, hugged by the 808 like drum pattern with, what I assumed to be a sampled organ, was an objective modern recreation of something Mobb Deep would have lyrically murdered in their prime.

The dark and almost ominous rift played in the lo-fi sampled organ, carried by the, almost unrecognizable bell instrument, and strung together by a heavily reverbed guitar, reminded me of the In-A-Gada-Na-Vida sample Nas destroyed a few years prior.

At this point I was intrigued by the sound and in love with the sample.

Unfortunately the execution left more to be desired.

The beat, overall, was not bad, but I, myself, could not imagine a rapper of substance utilizing this beat to deliver a memorable song. I could, however, in an oxymoron fashion, picture this beat draped in the background of American Gangster: The Series, or, not to partake in comedic relief, the DVD menu of a spy themed ebony porn.

There isn't much I can say, negative or positively, about this beat. The delivery sparked a sense of average during my listening periods. Other than the mixing and overall creepiness of this beat, this would, in my opinion, be a great addition to some sort of film or television show with a theme that treads in the realm of reality or seriousness.

A solid 2 out of 5.

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Thanks for the in depth review of my song: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=973906

Indeed I was going for a dark & sad mood hence the "bluesy" progresion and dark chords and instrumentation.

The concept in my mind was the killing of my brothers in the streets.

What can I do to improve this beat?

Anyone can chime in :)

I'm not sure if there is any room for improvement, or in all honesty, a need for it. This is one of those hit or miss beats. Obviously there was no intention of commercial appeal during the creative process of this beat, so that's not what I am referring to when I say "hit".

In my opinion, there seems to be a small timing issue between the drums and sample. This could be in due part to a heavy or not heavy-enough swing, or simple chopping issues in the reassembling of the sample.

Other than that, the beat is fine. It's just a niche beat. There is someone out there who could fit this beat to a T. That person may be hard to find, but nothing is impossible.
 
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