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Bro I like this...Wht equip you use? Clean mix everything seems right. I would suggested throwing things in, whether its a whole counter melody or fx or just some sort of switch up...it got bland halfway thru but I eff with it.
 
Haha counter melody, you hear any melodies in this? This is grown up music here not c[rap].

I use Fl Studio for everything and thanks for the comment, link?
 
LOL that eerie synth counts as a melody to me. btw you in a cult? your soundcloud freaking me out....yeah bruh its my username with a hypen in between.
 
Nice vibe, but a few things about the mix. You may want to try and get a bit more of a high end in there, whether that means a new instrument or just tweaking the EQ a litle bit. Sometimes it almost sounds to me like there's a high-pass filter on the track. I like the vibe. If you playe around with mid-side EQ a bit, and do a few things to add some stereo into the mix, I think you'd be shocked at how much more depth the overall sound can have. This is all just my opnion, I could be completely wrong, but it wouldn't hurt you to check those things out.

Hope that helps. If you wouldn't mind showing my Soundcloud some love, that would be great.
 
Very cool. Your song has a very dark feel to it as I'm sure you know and it sounds great. I love the ambient noises you used and the drums sound great. All the sounds are leveled out perfectly. I've pretty much got no criticism for this track. Keep it up, I would love to see this as a finished product!
 
Nice experimental track, it's got a good dark vibe. It really creates an atmosphere, nice work. Dope track ! That's just my personal taste but I think it might be better without the hi hats (but I could be wrong). Cheers
 
cityofpurplesprite said:
The drum patterning you did is what really caught my attention, props to you! I like the really spacey synth pads you got going on to, what plug ins you use anyway? Oh and if you don't mind dude I could use some feedback on this https://theprophetic.bandcamp.com/track/lie-to-my-ears thanks!
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Very dope track, the space in the track is what makes this track. I'm not a fan of the Drake sample, but I understand that's the whole Jas Prince/Drake/J Prince thang going on in Houston. I love the synth in the track, the part where the drums cut was very special, anyways nice effects as well on the vocal sick stuff.

I dunno what plugin's I used, I just use whatever I need too. I use Fab Filter and Blood Overdrive in my mastering stage though, mostly.

Thank you again everyone for your great feedback, this track took me a total of 4 hours from composition to mix to master to Soundcloud.

bLeSs.
 
This is very interesting... Reminds me of some real movie score material, especially something from the film The Town or a dope horror/thriller flick ie: Let Me In. In terms of the track I cant say I have any complaints, everything sounds on point. If you're shopping this to hip-hop artists I would add a sub bass of some sort although you'd need a real open minded artist like Kendrick Lamar or the A$AP team for this type of track. As a composition though this sounds very well done... Some light bass may help fill the beat in but if you're trying to shop this for film or TV I dont think youll need that. Keep up the great work man!
 
Very nice mix, and I like the drum pattern too. I don't know if I like the weird vibration on this track. It's kinda scary and dark. It's very original though :hmmm:
 
Hello Mr.Wonderful :)

You have made something very nice, I don't see many producers producing music in this way, I know that this beat looks like a bit like what Amon Tobin produces but correct me if I am wrong. I don't produce a lot, you just commented on my 7th beat but I think you should add more of those small and short sounds (I think they are named percussion but I am not sure). These glitch things, I know someone that buys these modified midi controllers and play with the eq's while making a sound, all these cracks and stuff.

It is very good mastered, I still have many difficulities with it and the vybe is very good of this beat. The panning on your snares are nicely done too and the hats sound very good. Maybe you should add some little high melodies at the end of a bar, like a high synth that is going up in notes but that is my opinion.

Overall you did a very nice job! :D
 
Man this tune's great. I always return feedback and do honestly go and listen to the tunes but it's not always possible to listen to someone's track start to finish and have them keep your interest for so long.
I've got a thing for wide pads and almost 'found sound' vibes going on and you've got that down.
Some of your production quality reminds me of some of Clams Casino's stuff, earlier stuff in particular.
How it's quite dark and melancholic with a crunchy edge in the mix.
I like it a lot man, look forward to getting this hookup done between us.
 
Like i heard a cinematic soundtrack!!! F**king awesome... at 1.33 you drums comin in really nice, and in the whole track i think that i listen an old chair creaking, great FX to give imagination!!!
 
This beat is very intrusive! The atmosphere and the space it sends you in just makes it that much dope, I like how its designed to put you in a specific mood, the drums were great, I feel you could of done more with the hi hats, but they fill that void regardless of structure. This song is very eerie, dark and trippy. Great work man!!
 
The intro is a little long maybe other than that the beat is ****ing hot! love the atmosphere on it!

Thanks for the feedback
 
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