Can You Hear Me f4f

[yjvasco]

check out another song i made...i made the beat, and thats me rapping...let me know what u guys think...off of Dont Mind Me cd

 

[YWM]

this is nice. like the lyricism and flow. wasnt feeling the hook of the song tho. the beat is good. its structured and transitions are real clear. good job and keep it up man

appreciate it if you could feed me back: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...back/new-kendrick-lamar-type-beat-f4f-476289/

 

[yjvasco]

thanks man, appreciate it....yeah, i could see the hook not being that strong..thanks

 

[TaylorMace]

The beat is nice. However i feel like you need to work on your mixing and also delivery. The hook could do with more work as i couldn't hear it clear. But overall you have something there. keep grinding dude and let no one hold you back.
Taylor Mace

Feel free to feed me back too much appreciated https://soundcloud.com/iamtaylormace/out-west

 

[yjvasco]

for sure man...thanks, will do

 

[yjvasco]

overall, it sounds good...i really enjoyed ur lyrics...ur style is dope, ur vocals really make the song..ur lyrical content, is nice...i do feel like the hook took away from the song, the beat kinda overides the vox..i would prob, change the lyrics maybe just the flow in those area...but i really did like it, u got talent