Can anyone please review by beats? **feedback returned**
- Thread starter Valentino
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Typing as I listen;
"Peek A Boo"
I am not a fan of cranking samples so they sound like Alvin and the Chipmunks. You may look into a warp engine that can manipulate pitch and tempo independently
The rapping is straight on this one, good voice for rapping.
Hook is kinda dry. Timing isn't quite right. I want more from this beat
"Put your G'z up"
Is that an accent?
The vocal mix is a little dry and loud for the track. I would throw some more verb on it. and bring the track up. Once again, great rapping.
I don't like the tambourine sound, or the low brassy sound, make it brighter.
"Who Am I"
Funny lyrics. HAHAHA I am laughing out loud.
I think this is my favorite so far. The beat is simple, but your flow accomodates that and fills it out. Once again, I would bring the track out.
Fill out the hook... add an arp or something. Good delay though
Eerie sampling with the 9/11 newscast. Too soon?
The scratch is way lame.
Overall;
I like your sound, but I think the biggest issue is your mixdown. Work on balancing your tracks more. I think they can be wider (various pans, etc.) and the vocals can blend in more.
Nice.
Leave me feedback at https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=302692
"Peek A Boo"
I am not a fan of cranking samples so they sound like Alvin and the Chipmunks. You may look into a warp engine that can manipulate pitch and tempo independently
The rapping is straight on this one, good voice for rapping.
Hook is kinda dry. Timing isn't quite right. I want more from this beat
"Put your G'z up"
Is that an accent?
The vocal mix is a little dry and loud for the track. I would throw some more verb on it. and bring the track up. Once again, great rapping.
I don't like the tambourine sound, or the low brassy sound, make it brighter.
"Who Am I"
Funny lyrics. HAHAHA I am laughing out loud.
I think this is my favorite so far. The beat is simple, but your flow accomodates that and fills it out. Once again, I would bring the track out.
Fill out the hook... add an arp or something. Good delay though
Eerie sampling with the 9/11 newscast. Too soon?
The scratch is way lame.
Overall;
I like your sound, but I think the biggest issue is your mixdown. Work on balancing your tracks more. I think they can be wider (various pans, etc.) and the vocals can blend in more.
Nice.
Leave me feedback at https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=302692
Valentino
New member
thx for your feedback! the tracks you reviewed were all part of a college project a couple of years ago and I realize there are a lot of amateur flaws with them, but it was all one giant learning curve.
The instrumentals further down the page are some of my newer tracks
And by the way, I do not rap on any of the songs you reviewed.The rappers are all local MCs.
The instrumentals further down the page are some of my newer tracks
And by the way, I do not rap on any of the songs you reviewed.The rappers are all local MCs.
Peek A Boo - I like this joint, its pretty solid...I like the chorus...dude reminds me of bone thugs
I didnt like Put Your Gz up much...Who am I was the best joint I listened to I like the beat, its one of those simple catchy tracks
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https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=302556
I didnt like Put Your Gz up much...Who am I was the best joint I listened to I like the beat, its one of those simple catchy tracks
hit me back
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Peek A Boo: The hook is clean. I don't usually like high pitched samples but this didnt bother me too much. Felt like it could use a bassline. Not bad rapping.
Put Your G'z Up: Overall not my style. Can't really distinguish much going on in the beat. not feelin the rapper on this one.
Put Your G'z Up: Overall not my style. Can't really distinguish much going on in the beat. not feelin the rapper on this one.