The intro is wayy too long and the drums sound really stock to me tbh. That main synth is cool, but you need some background and variety to make the track stand out. Keep grinding, I see potential but the elements need work.
Deep and dark. How I like my shit. Maybe a little more experimentation but that might be your artistic choice, as the previous brutha said; more elemental development
I appreciate the simplicity but there's still background stuff in Juicy and Wiz tracks that give it atmosphere and you don't really hear unless you're actively listening, you just kind of feel them and they play off the main melody. Also, when you're going for simplicity the elements that are there are more prominent so you REALLy have to have your sound design on point and as I said it doesn't have the processing that could do this track justice.
i like the Synth but the intro is way to long i think i saw someone else said that! and the cymbals could be turned down a tad. also the kick in the intro could be a bit hard but i guess it was like that to give room for the 808
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The melody for some reason reminds of the matrix. I like it. The intro feels a little long and like someone else said, the cymbals could be turned down a little. Maybe add some more melodies, it gets a little repetitive. Other than that its cool.
nice melody, nice beat and mix is cool. intro might be a lil too long, try 4 to 8 bars for the intro and then make sure you have the rest in song form, rap: 16 bars for the verse and 8 for the chorus 4 bar for breakdowns or breaks, maybe add some sound efx, tricks or samples to bring the track out some. you clearly have what it takes, just need to be a bit more aggressive, too laid back for trap me.
check my track, clearly shows tricks and breaks and in song form and its aggressive. when you don't have vocals you have to find a way to keep your audiences' attention. https://soundcloud.com/mozaart/doin-it-2-me