Good beat. The main synth needs to come up and sound clearer. The strings/pads at 1:10 sound dope. And maybe the snare to come in earlier. Theres an instrument with too much bass that crashes with the kick. Good concept though.
I listened to all of it, it wasn't bad but I think the build-up is boring. like I was kinda relieved when the instrumentation dropped in at 40 seconds or so. but the chorus is dope. that's what gave it an extra couple points or so with me. that kept things from getting dull. it's pretty solid though.