Hearing it right now. Love the sample and the flow of the song. I am sure it could be a lot better. I got a few ideas in my head of what I would do, but then again I haven't been making beats for a long time either. All in all I liked it. Keep it going.
just being honest its ok to me but listen thats how all music starts out brother thats just my opinion. actually i would like to hear more of your music. do you have a my space or site with your music on it. keep hitting those keys and banging those pads it will get there. trust me!!!