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[MGB]

Hi just wanted to ask you about what you think about this beat, especially the break.. Please help me out, need your opinion. I need someone to talk too..
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[xxX-Malik-Xxx]

just my opinion..I like the loop..I like the drums except for the wierd kick roll...the hook can be developed a little...the chop at 48 seconds seems very abrupt and does not flow well with the song...other than that not a bad job man....How long have you been doing this and what so you use?

[MGB]

Thanks Malik, started not too long ago. I wanna rush this beat and just stay with the hook and the chorus, cause i'm really feelin' it, just that. What do y'all think. I mean I got a lot of pending beats cause basically just layed them aside when I got another nice loop. Should I just rush the beat? Cause you'll never know what tomorrow BeatRINGS, sometimes it takes me weeks just to finish one beat. Any advice FP?

And Malik how do you do your basslines?

[DliMaX]

Sample is nice, bass is very nice, but the flow is horrible IMO. The sloppy random chops really disrupt this beat. The intro and break at 48 does not lead back into the beat. How do you do your basslines?

[dergillz]

man that sample is dope. You should experiment with it and chop it more. I like the way you have the verse and the hook arranged but that break just makes me thing you bumped into the turntable lol. Good work though man. Keep it up.

[MGB]

Thank you for the comments, and Dlimax, I sample my basslines, sometimes filter it, and play it to my keyboard. To Dergillz thank you aswell. So I learned that I gotta get rid of that kick roll, the break, and try to chop the sample more.

[lil jbm]

MGB the rolling kicks need to re-arranged better or taken out of the beat. I would suggest taking them out the sample will breathe alot better. The chops that come in with at 27 sec. sound really rough compare to the your other chops in this beat. I think that what's throwing the groove off aswell. The breakdown was cool it was to short which doesn't give the listener time to grasp it as a breakdown. Try looping twice then go back into the verse or chrous that followed.

Remember the intro and chrous are the most important parts of a beat. Some keep that in mind when you are making arrangements.

Your verse sounds better than your chorus and it should be the other way around.

From what I hear your arrangement need to be reworked.

If it was me I would have used these parts as followed:

The 1st 2bars of the breakdown part at 48 secs. would be intro. (I would have chopped the guitar off the end of the loop for the intro). Why it sound like it will grab the attention of the listener.

The verse part you have would be the chorus why it sound like the best part of the beat to me.

The rough chops at 27 secs. would be my verses with some other chops to smooth it out a bit but not clutter the verse so the emcee can have room to do his or her thing.

Just my thoughts hope something in this helps.

[MGB]

Thank you for that JBM.. one

[Adlib311]

Man i like this beat the way it is, People over analize sh*t, Make this break here make a drop here do your chop this way, blah blah blah blah, Honestly thats all B.S. If i was you i would disregard everything that was said. The beat is dope, All it needs is sum lyrics and production afterwords. Nice trak yo

[MGB]

Hehe, thanks Adlib. Well I got sick of the beat, cause I can't seem to figure out what to do, so I asked you guys for some insights. Thanks again FP.