Can U Critique My beat?

[Adversary]

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made with the korg es-1. Thanks

 

[Dj Path]

lovin it homie. very primo ish. i also happen to be an es-1 user. how did you chop it up so nicely?

 

[bOUNCE!]

You need a bassline. Basslines are very necessary.

It's kinda repetitive. So you AT LEAST need to switch up the beat for the hook/chorus.

drums are a tad weak, but i guess they fit the sample you chose well.

Work on improving these, and you'll be dope.

 

[XxTheRocxX]

That sample was chopped to perfection....


But your drums were weak, no bassline, and no hook.


......Hmmm...



Props on the sample, though.
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[C-Enes]

the sample was chopped too early, and the drumline got alittle repetitive at times. no bassline. but if you worked on it alot, you would have some hot **** on your hands.

 

[Adversary]

thanks for the replies!
im tryina think of what to do for a chorus.. and switchin up the drums.. i appreciate all the feed for real.