Need critique and advice

[Iser]

New Day(Prod. By Iser Godebie) 1.mp3 - Speedy Share - upload your files here

The above link is a link to a son I've recently recorded. I produced the beat and the vocals are mine too, but even though I've been doing this for years, mixing/mastering a song has always been something I found very tough, so I hope someone can listen to this and maybe tell me what I can do to the vocals, the beat and the entire song to make it sound as professional as possible.

Beat was made in Reason, mastered in Logic Pro.
Vocals were recorded in Logic Pro and obviously mastered there.

If you have any questions or if you want me to post the a capella or something, just let me know.

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[streetstruck]

You should put this somewhere we can stream this.