new song my personal favorite style really need constructive feedback

BENZODANKLIN

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https://soundcloud.com/bendanklin/camouflaged-in-purple-foret

please let me know on things i can do to improve the melody wether it be adding sounds or effects, personally, for what it is, i think the beat is dope and relaxing but it doesnt feel as slow as the tempo. lend me some good feedback and if you dig it hit up my other tracks and give me feedback on those too, not to mention if you produce or rap i like to listen to new music, soundclouds got some dope stuff. thanks
 
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