Can I get some feedback on my mixing?

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Rap - Instrumental Unnamed 7 - 30 - 2018l by Vitaman | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Any feedback? I can only mix using some shitty 15 dollar headphones, and the only speakers I can use are my laptop's speakers due to where I live. Making too much noise isn't ideal.
Would like a second set of ears to judge.

 

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Rap Instrumental 08012018 by Vitaman | Free Listening on SoundCloud

updated version. I mixed it a little differently. I didn't like how some areas were too loud... Thoughts?