Any advice on the mix of this song??

[DanyKing]

Just mixed this song myself, i am the artist on this song, any advice on the mixing?
Thanks!
Also, feel free to inbox me about any tips or whatevs!

 

[DarkRed]

I enjoyed it. Areas of improvement would be to add some rhythm energy.

 

[DanyKing]

Thanks for your reply May i ask if you can be a bit more specific though DarkRed?

 

[Mad Phonetics]

It would be nice if you answer my email.

 

[DanyKing]

Im having my producer send me those trackouts that were clipping at the moment! will send them through in a couple hours!

 

[Mad Phonetics]

All right.

 

[DanyKing]

Check your email!

 

[fatalman]

The vocals and the keyboard sound great.

I am joining to what DarkRed said though about the rhythm. It is VERY weak, and in general it degrades the quality of this track.

Want a great example of a band that rose to fame thanks to Rhythm alone? Think about Nirvana. Nevermind. Without those kick ass rhythms that makes you want to jump and scream, that album would have gone nowhere.

Drums are one of the most important elements of a music track.
They can make the whole difference between people realy digging in your song, or falling asleep while listening to it.

 

[Mezaven]

Sounds great man !

I'd add more percussion other than normal drums
Like Glass Animals
Listen to their track called Hazey