MUSIC VIDEO! MADE WITH IPHONE 4s. Critique Wanted

Hey so i wrote this song and made a video for it. The video was made [like the title says] with an iphone 4s and was edited with Adobe Premiere CS5! Don't ask me how i got my hands on that ;)

But yeah, let me know what you guys think of the whole thing. What i should do better next time, with the editing and overall. Other than buying a new camera. That I already know.

I actually plan on getting the Nikon D7100. Because of the buget I set. Any dissagrements and or opinions?
Let me know :) And don't be shy, like and share the video!!! If you liked it of course

P.S.
It's not rap ;)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FooVkpjBPbM
 
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