Fourth Video - "Mary Mary" Weed Song, help me finish

[SmittyVision]

This is the draft I submitted to the artist for my fourth video. We were going for something simple, budgeted for one location. Any feedback would be appreciated and considered in my final revision to be finished Tuesday night!

 

[BreatheMusic]

Sorry for the late reply. I've just seen it. He's doing a love song about weed.. He loves "Mary, Mary" so he should be in a happy setting. The video looks too dark and makes him seem depressed just sitting there. Just my opinion.

 

[mateart]

yes. more optimistic this clip should be

 

[TakeFlight]

yeah this seems like it would be the setting for a break up song, not him saying how he loves mary...but it was well shot and good quality

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https://www.futureproducers.com/for...mming-pools-remix-charles-x-t2i-video-426955/

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