first music video. i need critiques

[aice]

What do you guys think for my first music video? anything i need to work on?song and video. we didn't prepare for it and just recorded in a garage and bedroom. basically a gun and shoot kind of thing.

Shook Ones - Yung Ayse (Mobb Deep - Shook Ones Cover) - YouTube

 

[reapuh]

its good... u just need more scenes man

 

[claritynewyork]

You need a camera man...An more scenery...

 

[foreignpolicy]

Better production design would go a long way

 

[qsent]

Need more to it but not bad!!

 

[bnotesmil]

Nice work. Would like to see a few more cuts, couple more scenes. The angles are working really well.